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Age/Gender: 23, Male
Location: Beirut, Lebanon
Job: Graphic Designer
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Flash Reviews: 173
Music Reviews: 5
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173 Reviews | 28 w/ Responses
The colors are great and the shot angles ( If I may call them that ) are great as well but no peak in the story line really , When he looked at his finger I would have expected things to pick up from there but I guess there's always next time .... Good work
Author's Response:
Thanks :) i like doing slightly different angles but then doing really plain and borings ones to juxtapooose. haha. Yeah the storyline does flag. I really have to start storyboard/actually having a story before i start :)
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Would have looked even better with an original music score
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The sound , the quality need a little work but its got potential and it has some random humor and meaningless situations which is a good thing , at least for me it is
Author's Response:
Lol.
First, I want to thank you for the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
Yeah, we need the better mic. But we appricate the reviews.
Once again, thanks.
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Maybe work more on the quality of the voice but I wouldn't change a lot if I were you as its good family fun violence XD it was pretty cool with a good story line and a good style
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Just like I said its simplicity makes it all the better
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Very Good story line and the spider eventhough isn't the main character but it caught my attention and is very adorable and I would love to see him in more animations
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I didn't watch it till the end but I must say is there really an end to this or will it keep going on and ON however the sound is good and the motion along with it isn't bad but maybe a better Concept
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What is that supposed to do anyway ??? Bore you to death ??? I Hardly even call it a flash cause nothing was even animated ??? the music is OK but there is nothing else to evaluate ... no animation or sounds no interactivity no nothing
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It didn't make a lot of sense but maybe its craziness what made me watch it again ... you could have worked a little more on the animation and sound tbh ... I mean the voices of pincico or whatever his name could have been different , I know a higher pitched one maybe and Wanchop a little more deeper
Author's Response:
I didn't put much effort into this. Even all the voices are computer generated. I promise you my next movies will be better.
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I love it and a real original storyline , you never thought the boy would care enough to chase after the snail
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